Jesse, this article definitely has room for improvement: "innocent by standards." bystanders "Many veterans do not develop their disease until they have reached middle age because asbestos-related illnesses typically have a latency period lasting 20 to 50 years. This has lead to mesothelioma lawyer firms protecting and advocating the rights of victims." That's not a valid cause and effect relationship. "Many veterans have been plagued by peritoneal mesothelioma, a rare but severe lung ailment contracted only through asbestos exposure." No citation "asbestos as insulation aircraft" Switch the word order "It made it an ideal choice" You can't have something define itself (if that makes any sense). I would have written: "those properties made it an ideal choice ..."