I admire the desire to write this story of heroism.
But two things: first, the proper wording would be "....Deanda stated that SHE and her husband..." Not "her and her husband."
Second, I'm really not sure why the ethnicity of the victims was needed. The fact that they were Asian adds nothing to the story and could be construed as racist.
Conversation about: Hero saves sleeping Asian family from fiery demise
I admire the desire to write this story of heroism. But two things: first, the proper wording would be "....Deanda stated that SHE and her husband..." Not "her and her husband." Second, I'm really not sure why the ethnicity of the victims was needed. The fact that they were Asian adds nothing to the story and could be construed as racist.