Its an interesting story, but you lost me with the spite and anger. You might want to enlist a ghost writer if you can't remove yourselves enough from the situation to write objectively? Even though its a great story, you sound a little 'too involved' the way this is currently written. Hopefully you can make an effort to put out an ebook of your dad's story- it sounds really interesting.
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Its an interesting story, but you lost me with the spite and anger. You might want to enlist a ghost writer if you can't remove yourselves enough from the situation to write objectively? Even though its a great story, you sound a little 'too involved' the way this is currently written. Hopefully you can make an effort to put out an ebook of your dad's story- it sounds really interesting.