It might have been nice if, in the lead, your writer had got the day right. The competition was Saturday, not Friday. (You did get it right at the end). Also, the choreographer's name is Amy Seiwert, not Seiwart or Seiwarts, as you have it throughout.
Conversation about: Capital Choreography Competition at the Crest Theatre
It might have been nice if, in the lead, your writer had got the day right. The competition was Saturday, not Friday. (You did get it right at the end). Also, the choreographer's name is Amy Seiwert, not Seiwart or Seiwarts, as you have it throughout.