sounds exciting! wish i could have been there. The pictures are really cool. I liked how you explained everything made me feel like i was there.

Wow! He's good. I would definitely go see him play.

Sounds fun! I love that game. Why are you so interested in rookies? lol if you don't mind me asking.

I would like to hear a story about you. your life, achievements, passions etc.. What makes you unique? When you write how do you feel? You should write about something you think will catch people's attention, it just might change their mind about how they view things. Great Job!

I loved the article! The pictures were very interesting. I think that you should write more stories about other topics not just sports. I like how you structure your writing. You have everything you just need more people to read it. Not everyone likes sports so you should be diverse with your writing. I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. you are a great writer and should not hide it.