This was a very fun performance. The underlying story, while familiar, was very engaging. Seeing it done as a radio play was great fun.

See I already found an error. Should be "their" rather than "there".

Might have been a good idea to review this with your contributors to insure they understand the purpose of the contest and exactly how it works. An unpaid contributor could easily feel that there work is now going to be subject to nitpicking.

Doesn't the permit application have to have real info like the doctor's license number?

Sounds like you haven't encoutered problems getting disabled parking space due to cheats. I'm gladto hear that. One of the big problems of cheats can be that people that really need the spaces don't get them.