Photo shows HPI MDavis Reconnaissance Task Force (group shot) Somewhere in the Sacramento area, there is a home near a creek. The creek area is a place that I am very familiar with, because I have investigated this creek area one year ago. People claim to have seen American native Indian ghosts, ghosts of settlers and a demonic entity with red eyes that has the ability to fly. So when the occupant Michael Davis tells me his home is haunted, I have the tendency to believe him. The date is Oct... PaulDaleRoberts Pinelli comment-15838 2009-10-19T14:07:03Z 2009-10-19T14:07:03Z I agree about the bad writing and editing, hell, even the subject matter is laughable to me (though I do understand others might find it diverting). I've made this comment a few times on these articles before. But I am afraid you have just encouraged this guy to write more (see his current 'disclaimer'). It seems he thinks because he can sell a book (which I am sure was HEAVILY edited by a professional) he is purer than gold. Of course, people buy Dan Brown and Chicken Soup and all that crap, too, so who am I to overrate the taste of the American public?! Anywhooo, "her hairdresser moved by itself!" (actual line from one of his articles). At least it can serve as a primer in how not to write (and how not to act narcissistically). Pinelli 2009-10-19T14:07:03Z Geoff Samek comment-15822 2009-10-19T02:00:12Z 2009-10-19T02:00:12Z Our website is an open platform. Anyone can post. We then look at the content that comes in and place the best of it in the "laid out portion" of the front page. The bottom list section of the page represents any and all content as it is posted on our site chronologically. Before people post an article they can also request copy editing, or attend one of writing/journalism workshops, all of which we offer for free. If you have any other comments or feedback we would love to hear them at feedback@sacramentopress.com. Thank you for your comment. Geoff Samek 2009-10-19T02:00:12Z Argette comment-15807 2009-10-18T15:29:02Z 2009-10-18T15:29:02Z This article is poorly written. Please don't tell me it appeared in a newspaper! No wonder papers are folding right and left. It is disorganized, the syntax is off, and it's just plain awful. Argette 2009-10-18T15:29:02Z Paul Roberts comment-15803 2009-10-18T10:22:27Z 2009-10-18T10:22:27Z I forgot to add this into the article: During the third session, we only obtained more orb photos. I finalized this evening with a Catholic blessing. I walked around with Michael and as I did my blessing, I would ask Michael if he wants the entity here and he would say no, that he wanted them gone. My blessings utilize the hedge-of-protection prayer for the family and home, the 4 Winds Prayer, banishing the entities to the 4 winds - into the light, crucifix and holy water. Paul Roberts 2009-10-18T10:22:27Z Paul Roberts comment-15802 2009-10-18T09:23:34Z 2009-10-18T09:23:34Z http://s886.photobucket.com/albums/ac67/PaulDaleRoberts_bucket/MDavis/ Above are the pictures from the investigation. Notice the first picture, huge orb over the group shot photo. Paul Roberts 2009-10-18T09:23:34Z